HOW TO WRITE A SHORT STORY
HOW TO WRITE A SHORT STORY
Short stories are a form of narrative writing that has all the same
elements as novels—plot, character development, point of view, story structure,
theme—but are delivered in fewer words. For many writers, short stories are a
less daunting way to dive into creative writing than attempting to write a novel. This doesn’t mean writing short
fiction is easy—it, like every other kind of writing, comes with its own unique
challenges.
What
is a short story?
A
short story is a short, self-contained work of fiction that generally falls
between 1,000 and 10,000 words, because of this length constraint, short
stories tend to be less complex than longer works—in certain ways. In a short
story, you can build a world, but not to the extent you can build a world in a
(longer) novel. Similarly, you can have multiple fleshed-out characters, but
you can’t give every character a full back-story and meaningful character arc
like you can in a lengthier work. Generally, long, intricate plots with
multiple subplots are better suited to novel-length works than a short
story.
Don’t
take this to mean your short story’s theme can’t be as deep as a longer work’s
theme. You don’t need an extensive world with a complex magical system and an
entire cast of three-dimensional characters to express a theme effectively.
While short stories have fewer words, simpler settings, and smaller casts than
novels, they can have just as much of an impact on readers. If you’re looking
to read a powerful short story and see how other authors communicate
substantive themes in just a few thousand words, check out these famous,
impactful works:
·
The
Thing Around Your Neck by
Chimamanda Ngozi Adichie
·
“The
Lottery” by Shirley Jackson
·
“Thank
You Ma’am” by Langston Hughes
·
“Sonny’s
Blues” by James Baldwin
How long should a short story be?
Like
we said in the previous section, short stories typically contain between 1,000
and 10,000 words. Stories longer than 10,000 (but shorter than 40,000) words
are generally considered novellas. You might even come across the
term novelette to refer to a story between 7,500 and 17,000 words.
There’s
really no limit to how short a story can be, though. Consider Hemingway’s
famous six-word story:
“For sale:
baby shoes, never worn.”
In
just six words, Hemingway evokes an entire scene and the back-story that led to
that scene. This is an extreme example of a short story, and it relies on the
reader extrapolating meaning from the words, but because it does so
successfully, it counts as a short story.
What’s in a short story?
Every short
story has these five elements:
·
Character
·
Plot
·
Theme
·
Conflict
·
Setting
Characters are the people (or animals, aliens, mythical creatures, or sentient objects) who do the action in your story. Your protagonist is the character who undergoes some kind of change (or lack thereof) as a result of the story’s main conflict. Your antagonist is the character (or something abstract) attempting to prevent the protagonist’s change. To clarify, the antagonist doesn’t have to be a person—it could be the protagonist’s environment, their society, or even an aspect of themselves.
Mine your imagination
Just like every other type of writing, a short story starts with brainstorming.
In fact, the process for writing a short story is the same writing process you use for other kinds of
writing, like essays and presentations.
Ask
yourself this: What do I want my short story to be about? Jot that down. Do you
already have a clear idea of who your characters are or the setting they’ll
inhabit? Or are you starting with a theme you want to convey, and now you need
to develop a story to express that theme?
Start your brainstorming session with the elements you
already have, then flesh out your story idea from there. Write down your
setting, your characters, the conflict they face, and any key plot points you
have in mind. You can fill in details later; right now, the goal is to have
some rough data to use for your outline.
Don’t move on to outlining until you’ve defined your story’s
conflict. Without a conflict, you don’t have a story. Although all of the five
elements listed above are necessary for writing a great short story, conflict
is the one that drives your plot, shapes your characters, and enables you to
express your theme.
The
next step in writing short fiction is outlining your story.
When you outline your story, you organize the notes from your
brainstorming session into a coherent skeleton of your finished story.
Outlining your story is a key part of prewriting because it’s where you develop
your story’s framework and sketch out how each scene follows the previous scene
to advance the plot. This stage is where you determine any plot twists or big
reveals and fit them into the story’s sequence.
Next,
it’s time to write.
Don’t
worry about grammatical mistakes—you’ll fix them later.
Don’t
worry about your narration or dialogue being extraneous or not making complete
sense—you’ll fix that later too. Right now, you’re working on a rough draft.
Just get that story out of your imagination and onto the page without being
self-conscious about it.
Keep that
first draft as tight as possible. You’re writing a short story, after all, so
be economical with your words. Keep these tips in mind as you
write:
·
You don’t need to explain everything. Give
enough explanation so the reader understands what’s happening in a scene; don’t
slow them down with paragraphs of backstory and exposition.
·
Keep the ending in mind. As you write,
determine whether each sentence ultimately progresses the plot. If it doesn’t,
either cut it or rework it so it does progress the plot.
·
Listen to how people speak. Then, write
dialogue that sounds like real conversations. These conversations won’t
necessarily be grammatically correct, but they will make your characters sound
the way people naturally speak.
Once you
have a finished first draft, let it rest. If you have the luxury of waiting a
day or so to come back and read what you wrote, do that. That way, you can read
your writing again with fresh eyes, which makes it easier to spot inconsistencies
and plot holes.
Then it’s time to edit. Read your writing again and note any places where you can make the writing more descriptive, more concise, more engaging, or simply more logical. At this stage, it can be very helpful to work with readers’ feedback. If you’re comfortable sharing your work and receiving constructive criticism, share your rough draft with friends and family—and, if possible, with other writers—and let their feedback guide the revisions you make.
Give a writing prompt a shot
If getting started is what’s giving you a hard time, consider using a writing prompt. A writing prompt is like kindling for your short story. They’re generally brief, at just a sentence or two, and describe scenarios writers flesh out into full-fledged stories. Run a web search for “writing prompts” and you’ll find a ton. You can even tailor your search to a specific genre, like “horror writing prompts” or “romantic comedy writing prompts.
When a particular scene is what’s making it difficult to move forward, skip it. There’s no rule that says you have to write your short story in order. Just move ahead to the next scene that you can write, and then when you’re finished, revisit the challenging one. In many cases, it’s easier to write a scene once you know what happens after it.
Where
to distribute your short story
If you’re like most authors, one of your goals is to publish
your story.
There are
two main ways to do that: traditional publishing and self-publishing.
In the short fiction world, traditional publishing generally
means having your work published in a literary magazine. There are thousands of
literary magazines currently being published around the world, each with a
unique combination of editorial focus, publishing schedule, submission process,
acceptance rate, and payment for authors.
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